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| Lots of clutter in the background |
Our framing isn't brilliant as there is lots of unnecessary scenery that we don't need to see.
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| We can barely see Alex! |
Bad Lighting. To make this better we must use artificial lighting for our foundation portfolio.
Good points:
- We observed all 3 of the continuity techniques
- Used a lot of purposeful mise en scene!
As long as you learn from it. Its never nice to recieve criticism when you have worked hard. You clearly have the potential as a group to do really well. you understand editing and you work hard. Go for it now but keep these improvements in mind
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